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May 21, 2009
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May 16, 2009, 3:46:49 PM
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With scenes like these, a beautiful vast landscape with wonderful natural features, its sometimes hard to think of things that can be constructive and helpful for the artist.

I think the whole shot needs to be a bit higher up. The foreground here is absolutely wonderful but I see the sky here as the more important element than the grass below. I'm not saying the shot should've been mostly sky, just that to have the horizon 1/3 from the bottom would've made this into an even more gorgeous shot. OR, the other way around. Show more grass to make IT have the focus and take away some of the sky focus.

The colors here together with the hazic atmosphere turns this into a photo of very high quality. We have detail throughout the whole shot and the balance in general here is just fantastic.

One of the best shots I've seen in a long time, very good wodk. Solid quality, keep it up mate!

/Robin
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This is going to be a very positive review because this is a shot I would have liked to have taken myself and you have pulled it off extremely well.Good crisp foreground and nice light allow the shadow to make a natural vignette along the front of the work.
The path snakes to the left and then takes our eyes straight to the brooding mountain shrouded in mist and capped with some fluffy white clouds. The sky is exposed nicely with a golden gradient and yet we can still see details in the village and on the lower slopes.I can see the lie of the land may have sloped to the right but I think a degree or three of rotation would make the shot sit even better. Well done.
I like this critique system because it is showing me artists work I may not have come across before :)
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*Hanooali Mar 25, 2012  Student Photographer
the cloud formation above the mountain kindda looks like a dragon. lolx. awesome work
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Awesome!
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You're welcome!
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:iconerozja:
Hi! :wave:

Your beautiful work has been featured in my journal here: [link] :heart:

Greetings! :aww:
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!ligtherzein May 1, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Oh! that looks like my country!
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:iconadityapudjo:
hehe is it called Indonesia?:D
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!ligtherzein May 23, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
No, Dominican Republic xD
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